Memento Mori

I believe no idea should ever be abandoned (unless said idea involves a cast full of Mary Sues). This is short so there isn't much to review. However, I noticed ...

Hello! I'm going to be your reviewer (for this moment). If I'm too harsh or if you feel I'm being unfair, then I apologize in advance. I turn on the ...

I'll point out some of your mistakes, and if I am mistaken or if I'm too harsh, I apologize ahead of time. Here goes! 1.) The fact that Adin wants ...

1. Do you get any feel for Skye's personality yet? If yes, what helped to build up her character? If not, what could I do to improve? Somewhat. I think ...

It's somewhat interesting, but I wonder, where in the world is the baby fairy's wings? Won't the human parents notice that their child has wings, unlike other normal human babies? ...

I haven't read the books, but the way you guys talk about it.... I don't think I'll ever pick it up. Anyway, I find it no wonder that the book ...

that threaten That threatened There is no gods, when you die, you die. There are no gods; when you die, you die. There is a god who will accept me ...

"My stomach lurched, my shoulder stung, my pulse thumped in my ears, making my head ache worse." I think you should put the word and between stung and my. I ...

I don't get it. Hades knew Poseidon's problem? But pretty interesting, apart from the near end. You seemed to have some rough spots towards the end. “Hi to you and ...

Cute story. There seems to be a ton of good stories about imaginary friends that are sad at the same time cute. I liked this one too!! You captured the ...

It's short and straight to the point, I like that part. It's confusing, which isn't so good. Finally, it leaves the reader wanting more, which is also a good thing. ...

It's pretty mysterious, in its own strange sense. Of course, you could have left of on a cliff hanger, most people like it better that way. :D Yours truly, Memento ...

I don't get the ending. I understood the story, everything but the end. Anyway, on to fixing stuff! You used the word glare way too much. It kind felt weird ...

1) After reading this, does chapter one make a little more sense?? No?? Advice? Yes, sort of. It provided a reason as to why he coincidentally bumped into her and ...

It's pretty good, even though I don't understand what happened to the captain's daughter. Could you make that clearer please? Also, you could describe the past events more vividly. But ...